Make Me Whole

Make me whole episode 29 – 30

💞MAKE ME
WHOLE🔞
{She’s got me twisted}

CHAPTER 29💕30

THEME: Burn for me Elsa🔥

Written by 🌺 Mayor 🌺

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✨DEALING✨
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~YEARS.. AGO~

“Mom! I’m home!” Young Elsa entered the house throwing her bag on the couch. Her long hair was tied into bun, her highschool skirt short with her white shirt well ironed.

“Sweetie do not drop your bag on the couch. Go to your room and keep it!!!” Mrs Jolie yelled from the kitchen.

Elsa huffed, she picked up her bag and dropped it in her room before running back to the kitchen to hug Mrs Jolie.

Their apartment was on the seventh floor, neatly arranged.

“How was your exam sweetie?” She asked doing the dishes.

“It was good, where’s Piper and Dad?” She asked.

“They went to the grocery store. Sweet right?”

“Big sis!” Young George came dragging Elsa’s skirt.

“Awwn cutie, I’ve missed you so much” Elsa said kissing his face all over. She took him to her room and bought out snacks for him. After a while, they both slept off till 7:00pm.

“Argh!!!” A scream woke Elsa up. The scream came again and she sat up. “Mom?” She spared little George a glance before running out of the room. Her eyes widened seeing the scene before her.

Jolie clothes were torn revealing most part of her body. There were two dangerous goons in the room. She recognized one of them, it was her father old friend.

“Run Elsa! Take your brother and get out of here!!” Jolie yelled seeing her but Elsa couldn’t move from her spot. She watch one of them grab her hair pulling his d*ck out to f*ck her. Anger took over her system and she ran to push the guy. The other made to hit her but dodge kicking him on his groin. She held her mother and they both ran to her room, closing the door Immediately.

George was already up by that time. Jolie called her husband but he wasn’t picking.

Perceiving a strange smell Elsa frowned. “Petroleum”.

By the time Jolie opened the door, the fire was before them. She watched the two guys creating more all over the house before leaving. She closed the door back before it could enter the room.

George began to cough hard because of the smoke.

“We need to escape through the window grab the bedsheet” Jolie ordered.

Knowing her plan, Elsa began to form to form a rope by tearing every piece of cloths in her room.

Unknown to them those guys turned on the stove before leaving.

The door caught fire and fall into the room hit Elsa’s left leg, she screamed out hard. The pain was hellish.

Jolie was done preparing the rope for their escape. She ran towards Elsa and helped her up.

“Go first, I’ll take your brother and climb down too” Jolie said. She would have tell Elsa to take her brother but the wound on her leg would make it impossible.

Elsa nodded and leaped her way towards the window and began to climb down immediately.

Jolie went to grab a cloth and place George on her back.

A click sound was heard and the next she saw was red lights. The apartment suddenly explode throwing Elsa down. She fell on her back and cough out blood.
‘No’ she thought as the fire grow worse. A tear run down her cheek. A huge stone with fire suddenly began to fall to hit her but someone carried her immediately and save her.

“Hey, you okay?” It was a male voice. She couldn’t see his face because of her blurry sight. Her face was covered with bruises and blood.

“Elsa!” She heard her father called and the sound of sirens everywhere. He took her from the strange guy who left the scene immediately. Piper was sobbing. Riader asked for his wife and son and was told they wasn’t saved.

The next thing she heard before passing out, was the scream of her father.

“Jolie!!!!!!!!”

°°°

~PRESENT~

“Mom!!!” Elsa spranged up breathing hard, her face covered in her on sweat. It took her a while before remembering what really happened. The audition, confession, the attack, Charlie and the fire.

She look around and find out she was in the hospital.

“Charlie” she muttered then found a girl laying on her back with a Oxygen mask on her face. She was on drip. Her pink hair messy and she has bruises on her face.
“Oh Charlie” she muttered removing the pipe in her own hand. She made to stand but she fell back down.

“Miss!” A nurse quickly ran towards her. “please stay still, your body isn’t strong enough yet” she said.

“Is Charlie alright?” She asked.

“Yes. Thankfully, she was found early and was given blood” the nurse replied.

‘Thank God’ she thought. Wait! How was she saved. “Who bought me here?” She asked.

“A man named Mr Adams, he’ll be here to check on you soon. I’ll inform him you’re awake” She replied.

Elsa smiled waiting for Raymond. His surname his Adams so it’s definitely him.

The door opened and she look up instantly, her smile disappeared not seeing Raymond but a strange handsome guy. “Who are you?” She asked.

The guy gave her a smile before sitting before her. His metallic eyes looks dangerously handsome, tatooed just like Raymond. There were five piercing on each of his ear.

“Hey Elsa, it’s nice to finally meet you in person” He grin.

Maltida was busy pacing in her office. Her mind was in sync. How the hell did Elsa escape the fire?

Dahlia stormed in looking restless. “You’ve got to help me”

“Help you with what? You’ve done your part on telling me how to get that b*tch and I’ve done my part on teaching her lesson but why didn’t you tell me that she has someone dangerous in her background”

“How f*ck do you expect me to know?” Dahlia snapped.

“Who saved her then? The plan was smooth and my men never make mistakes!!” Maltida yelled.

Yulia, her assistant rushed in. “Miss, something is going?”

“What? There is a new about you attacking a girl named Elsa Rolland”

“What!!” Matilda exclaimed picking up her phone. It was true. There was a new about her. A recording of her ordering her men to deal with Elsa was posted online, Dahlia’s name was even mentioned.

“Oh my God! Ray is going to kill me” Dahlia tremble on her spot.

“Who’s Ray?”

“He is a psycho. The guy I told you I fell in love with”

An uproar was heard in the hallway. Dahlia and Maltida could hear it.

“Sir! You can’t go in… Ahh!!!” They heard a bone break and the scream of one of the securities.

“Oh God, he’s here” Dahlia shifted back.

“I’m gonna sho… Ahh!!”

“What’s going on?” Yulia also feel the fear creeping it’s way in.

The door opened and one of the securities fell unconscious before them revealing Raymond. He slowly stepped in, his eyes dangerously cold as the stared at the two b*tches before him.

Yulia made to call the cops but when Raymond turn his gaze to her, her phone fell as she tremble on her spot.

Maltida swallowed, her eye was on the security laying unconscious. She felt the chill running through her spine.

“Ray, I can explain” Dahlia starts to speak.

“It’s really nice I meet you both here. How lucky” Raymond grin evilly.
“I once told you I don’t hit girls but I’m gonna break that rule today”

Wilson was busy with some paper works. This Black Venom guy is just so mysterious and he knows well that this person is just around them. He could be under his nose.

“I’m going to find you and chew you up, I promise” he muttered. His phone rang interrupting his thoughts. “Hello” he answered.

“What!” He exclaimed after a while.

An hour later, Raymond was before him with his eyes still cold. He did not regret what he did even for a sec.

“Were you planning to kill them for real. Do you know the implication?” Wilson asked. He had met Maltida and Dahlia in a really bad situation. They have bruises all over their face and some of their bones broken. They are currently in the hospital receiving treatment with some cops ready to arrest them.

Read – Annabella episode 23 – 24

“Yeah I was planning to kill them not until I remember my babe won’t like it if I did” Raymond replied.

“I know you’re upset on what they did to her but that doesn’t mean you should do that”

His words were starting to piss him off. “Can I make a phone call?”

“Just one phone call. You’re not going to get away with this” Wilson said handing the phone to him.

Raymond took it and dialed a number. “Hey old man, how much longer do I have to wait huh? I have some shit to do!” He snapped ending the phone call.

Wilson lips could only hang. What just happened? The higher authorities called him immediately ordering him to release Raymond.

Wilson scoffed dropping the phone call.

“Goodbye, duck” Raymond stood not hearing anything from Wilson and head towards his car with his sunglasses on then towards the hospital straight.

Raymond went to meet the doctor. “How is she?”

“She woke up and slept not too long ago” he replied.

“Thanks” He said turning to leave.

“Sir!” The doctor called and he stopped.

“Your brother just left” The doctor said and his eyes widened. That asshole Brahms came?

A call discontinued their discussion and a strange number flashed on his screen.

“Hey” A deep familiar voice sounded through his phone.

“Why the hell did you come here huh? How about you mind you damn business from now on” Raymond said coldly knowing it was Brahms.

“Aren’t you going to appreciate me for saving her? She would have died if not for me” He said.

Brahms was the one who saved Elsa since his men had his eyes on her. They also found Charlie and called the ambulance for her.

“You’re expecting a thank you? Okay here it goes… ‘Fuck you’.. Stay away from her. I know what you’re trying to do. I promise to find out what you’re hiding. Tell Zeke I hate him” He cut the phone afterward and block the number.

He went straight to Elsa’s ward and found Leonard sitting beside Charlie. His eyes were red because of him not sleeping. There was a patch on his arm since he was the one who gave Charlie his blood.

“Where were you when that asshole came here?” Raymond asked.

“The doctor called for me” Leonard replied.

His went towards Elsa immediately and held her tiny hand.
“I’m sorry I couldn’t protect you” he muttered kissing her knuckles.

°°°

~TWO DAY.. LATER~

“I’m glad you’re okay now” Elsa said kissing Charlie’s hair. She was getting discharged soon.

“Me too, I was so scared” Natasha said.

Charlie woke up already. Although, she was still a bit upset with Leonard but hearing how he stayed and gave her his blood, she decided to forgive him.

Mason and Leonard decided to stay with her all through.

“Thanks” she said to everyone as they all left.

Raymond hand were holding Elsa’s throughout. Jake and Natasha didn’t fail to notice.

“They are dating for real?” Natasha asked.

“I almost peed on myself when I saw the video of him confessing his feelings.

Natasha swallowed and look away. She once had a crush on Raymond. That was when she just got into the school. Raymond being a Playboy, used this to get his way to her and when she confessed her feeling, she got an heartbreak in return. This made her change totally in both in appearance and Character.

“I hope he doesn’t do the same to Elsa” She muttered.

“Are you free?” Jake asked her.

“Yeah why?”

“I’ve got two ticket for a movie, the girl I was planning to go with said she won’t be able to come. I was wondering if you could replace her?”

“Sure Jakey”

“I told you not to call me that” Jake snapped.

“What are you gonna do?” Natasha poked her tongue.

Jake let out a throaty chuckle and watched how Natasha continued to tease him with a smile plastered on his face.

….

“Uhm Ray” Elsa called while Raymond was driving. Simce the two day, Raymond had been quiet and cold. He only response was either ‘Yes’, ‘No’ or ‘Hmm’. She began to Wonder if she had offend him.

“Hmm” He replied focusing his eyes on the road.

“Is everything alright?” She asked.

“Yes” he gave her a short reply. Does he not want her anymore? Is he back to his rude self again?

“A..Are you sure” she asked.

“Yes”

She twisted her lips and the car turned silent again until they got to the dorm. He got down from the car and she did the same. Holding her hand, he led her into her dorm with a blank look.

She sat on her bed and watch him type somethings on his phone.

“I’ve ordered pizza, it’ll be here in a minute. Freshen up, I’ll be right back” he said to her.

“Did I do something wrong?”

“No” He started his short replies again before leaving. The room was a bit dark since it was close to evening. She went towards the bathroom and have a warm shower then wore a comfortable nightgown.

Raymond came in after settling the delivery guy and walked towards her placing the pizza in front of her.

“Eat” He said.

“What about you?”

“I’m not hungry” he replied.

“You haven’t eaten since morning” she reminded him.

“I’ve gone three days without eating, it’s not a problem now eat Elsa” he said almost coldly.

“No I won’t” she folded her arm under her br**st.

“Why?”

“Cus I’m not hungry” Hearing this, Raymond pulled the ring on his lower lips in his mouth.

“The doctor said you need to eat well” he said after staring at the stubborn girl for a while.

“I’m not hungry” she repeated causing Raymond to sighed.

“Fine I’ll eat, happy now?” Raymond finally said and her lips stretched into a smile.

While eating, Raymond bites were slow while Elsa’s was fast. She was hungry. Seeing this, Raymond shook his head and smiled a little.

“Such a glutton” he muttered taking a bite. Elsa heard it.

“Did you just call me a glutton?” She raised her brow.

“Yeah, what are you gonna do? Snow” he asked as if daring her. He was back to his playful self.

“Only Charlie can call me snow” she rolled her eyes.

“Snow, Snow, Snow, Snow…” He kept saying the word snow and she made to hit on him. He dodge and kept on calling her Snow.

Grabbing the pillow Elsa tried to hit him on the face but he grabbed it and used it to draw her close to himself pinning her against the wall.

Nose almost touching, His hand on her waist and the other above her head. His amazing cologne hit her nose and her heart began to beat widely.

“You’re making me horny even without trying babe” he said in the sexiest voice she had ever heard. Some part of his hair covered his forehead making him look hot. “I’ve missed you snow” he lips curved up as he lean down for a kiss.

Elsa tilted her head giving him the access to kiss her deeper. She missed the way his lips moves on hers so much.

Without wasting any moment, Raymond traced his hand under her gown grabbing her ass bare…

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To be continued..😋

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