Make me whole episode 81 – end

💞MAKE ME
WHOLE🔞
{She’s got me twisted}

CHAPTER 81💕82 {FINAL}

THEME: Burn for me Elsa🔥

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✨MAKE ME WHOLE✨
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Brahms tried to steer but the car didn’t respond. He had been trying it for three minutes now and no avail.

“The car is hacked. I can’t control it” Brahms announced.

“Hacked? What do you mean hacked, I thought Mikaela took care of Venom’s hackers” she said.

“Yeah, what’s going on Raymond!” He tapped his earphone but no respond.

“There’s no signal fuck. Where is it taking us to?”

“Oh God” Elsa muttered when the car sped up.

Brahms finally got connected to Raymond but unfortunately, Raymond wasn’t wearing his earphone.

“Ray! Ray do you copy?”

..no response..

“Ray c’mon respond!”

…no response…

“Is he alright? I just hope he’s alright” Elsa muttered.

Brahms eyes widened when he saw where they are heading.

…The sea?!..

He tried opening the door but no avail, even the window was locked completely. If they happen to fall into the sea then they’ll both die.

Lucas groaned out in pain. His body began to feel weird. The stab wasn’t ordinary. He look up and found Raymond smirking down at him.

“W..W..what did y..you do?” He asked but blood came out of his lips. “Argh!” His chest tighten giving him a hellish pain.

“What do you think. That knife was specially made for you” Raymond said dipping his bloody hands into his pocket.

“P..oi..son?” Lucas asked, his eyes turning red.

“Hmm, I got it from Lisa. The poison would only make you feel extremely pain and make you suffer for a while” He said.

Lucas face squeezed in so much pain. His tongue felt numb and his head spin so badly.

“S..stop the p.. pain” Lucas muttered losing consciousness.

Raymond sighed and look back. His eyes widened seeing the car.

Raymond grabbed his earphone and put it on.

“Ray.. answer goddamit! We are about to die here!!” Brahms yelled.

“I’m on it” Raymond replied.

“We are close to cliff, we’ll fall in less than a minute!” Brahms yelled quickly.

‘Seconds left Ray!’ his mind screamed.

“Stop the car” Raymond said quickly.

“Yes sir” Cybrog replied

The car suddenly stopped as they almost fall. Half of the car was on the ground while half was hanging on the cliff.

“Brahms, you alright?” Raymond asked.

“Fuck no, we are hanging any movement from us would kill us both!” Brahms yelled.

“Ray!” He heard Elsa’s voice.

“Those close to the area where the car is, find a way to save the people there immediately. If they die then you’re fucked” Raymond ordered. immediately, men around the area began to search for the car.

“Connect me to the car” Raymond ordered Cybrog and he obliged.

“Hey Snow” A voice sounded in the car.

“Wait isn’t that Venom’s voice?” Brahms eyes widened.

“No it’s me Ray… I’m in Lucas’s secret room… You guys would be rescued soon I promise” Raymond said.

“Ray, I’m glad you’re okay” Elsa said breathlessly.

The car shifted and they both screamed.

“Guys don’t move okay, just stay still”

“Raymond I’m scared” Elsa said fearfully.

“Hey babe. Yunno I love you right and I’m never going to allow anything to happen to you. Beside, I wanna go to the rollercoaster once again with you” He said.

“Really, I hope you won’t be screaming your ass out?” Elsa chuckled.

“I’ll try not to scream but you have to hold me tight okay. I wanna rest my head on those boobs of yours” He said.

“Oh Gawd” Elsa laughed lightly.

“Okay, there’s a third person here, can you both stop” Brahms said.

“Gosh Brahms, can’t you see I’m trying to calm her down. How about you go find your own girl to calm you” Raymond said.

“Ha.. I forgot to mention this. I actually told Mr Adams that I want Elsa to be be my wife” Brahms smirked, Elsa and Raymond eyes widened at once.

“What did you just say?” Raymond asked.

“You heard me, I’m not gonna repeat myself” Brahms smiled.

“Okay, you just earn yourself a good beating. Make sure you don’t show yourself cus I’m gonna cut your balls”

“Why would you ask that kind of request Brahms?” Elsa asked raising her brow to him.

“I was just doing it to piss Raymond off” Brahms shrugged.

“Oh I’m gonna kill you. How do you want you death? Knife, Gun or being burn alive?” Raymond asked.

“Keep dreaming.. fuck!” Brahms exclaimed when the car moved again.

“Where are they Ray, why is it taking so long?” Elsa asked shutting her eyes close.

A car drove to the area. Zeke, Dagon and some men rushed down from the car. They hung a strong chain behind the car connecting it to a huge truck.

“They are here” Brahms said hearing some sound.

“Thank God” Raymond breath out.

Just then, the car moved to fall completely but the chain held it.

“Argh!” Elsa screamed, the belt holding her cut and she fell breaking the glass using her body. She was fast enough to stretch her arm and Brahms caught her.

“Elsa!” Raymond called.

“I’ve got her Ray” Brahms managed to utter through those gritted teeth.

Brahms belt also cut but he was fast enough to grab the car, his other hand still holding Elsa.

Read – Oh My Heart episode 67 – 68

He managed to pull Elsa up and she grabbed the car too.

The truck was moved backwards dragging the car up until they were back on the land.

“They are fine, now” Zeke informed Raymond.

“Yes!” Raymond raised his both hand in air. “Gawd, I was so scared” he swept his hair backwards before looking back at unconscious Lucas.

He eyes land on a special earphone just beside the control buttons. He wore it.

“Hello black Venom” A female programmed voice sounded.

“Hello?” Raymond frowned.

“What can I do for you?” The voice asked.

Raymond look around before speaking. “Show me all the secrets Kept in here” he muttered.

Thousands of folders began to appeared on the screen. Raymond’s lips parted in surprise.

One folder caught his attention. ‘Victoria Hampton’ he clicked on it and a video appeared. The footage shows how the prime minister ordered his sister’s death. The video of how his sister was raped, tears streamed down his eyes and he stopped to video.

He clicked a footage having his name on it. The video of how the took his fingerprints, his sweat and even his hair to tamper with the scene.

He asked for Charlie and when she was connected, he spoke.

“We are going to need the media again”.

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~HOURS LATER~

Raymond look at the big building in front of him and then unconscious Lucas who was kept in the car.

He got into his car and start it. After driving a little bit further, the building blew off completely burning every single thing inside. Both the dead bodies and technology burnt down to ashes.

“Did you see the news?”

“Oh my God the prime minister?”

“Sandra had been in jail for a sin she didn’t commit”

“Oh my God, there are so many dirty secrets”

“Thank God, their evil deeds are exposed”

“They frame innocent people”

Some innocent prisoners who saw this smiled. Some were even jumping because they would be released.

..Footage and voice notes were released…

Newton dropped the metal bucket in his hand and jumped so high. He even peck on of the police cheek.

“Sorry” he said quickly when the police glared at him.

“Justice at at last” Wilson muttered.

Raymond only released the relevant once and destroyed the irrelevant ones like the nudes of the Judge’s daughter.

The news was everywhere in the different countries. Police began to arrest the corrupt official. The judge, The chief police, the nurse, the prime minister, and many more of them.

Elsa sat on her spot, she haven’t seen Raymond yet. There was a thick fabric wrapped around her shoulder. She was at the hospital.

“Waiting for me?” She heard his familiar voice and look up at him.

She jumped and hugged him tightly. He returned the hug and kiss her hair lightly.

“I was so scared” she muttered against his chest while sobbing lightly.

“Me too babe” Raymond replied honestly.

“You’re under arrest for attempting murder and some other crimes” A police said putting an handcuff on Jeremy.

Piper face was cold as they dragged him out.

“Wait!” Elsa called running towards the police, they stopped.

“I just need to tell him something” Elsa smiled then face Jeremy. The police nodded and let go off him.

“Elsa.. I can..”

His word were cut short with a punch reaching his face, he fell heavily and Elsa climbed on him throwing punch repeated on his face.

“Oh shit” Raymond eyes widened seeing it.

The police tried to drag her away from Jeremy but she yelled..

“Let go off me, I need to destroy, that butthead face!” She yelled dragging his hair this time. By now, Jeremy’s face was unrecognizable with blood and swollen face.

Raymond wrapped his built arm around her waist and dragged her away. Elsa swing her leg kicking Jeremy again.

“I wanna kill him!” Elsa yelled as Raymond put her over his shoulder.

“I love you sis!!” Piper yelled smiling brightly. She love the scene.

“Piper!” Mason called her from behind.

“Baby!” She squealed running to hug and kiss him.

“You’ve treated your wounds?” Mason asked.

“Oh yes I did. I wanna drink with you tonight” Piper said kissing him again.

“Okay” Charlie chuckled. “I guess Elsa is my sister in law now” she said.

“It’s cool” Leonard muttered.

“Leonard” Mr Miller called behind and they both look back just to see his parents with a sorry look.

“I’m so sorry about what we did. We shouldn’t have forced you into what you don’t want. Can you please forgive us” Mrs Miller said.

“We accept your marriage with Charlie. She’s amazing” Mr Miller said.

Charlie smiled tucking her hair behind her ear.

“Thanks” Leonard said.

“By the way Charlie, I would like you to sign into Mizel entertainment industry. There are a lot of offer for you” Mr Miller said.

Charlie eyes rolled back and pretend to almost fall. Leonard caught her laughed lightly staring at her face.

“Am I dreaming?” She muttered.

“No you’re not wife” Leonard chuckled at her childish behavior.

“Wow” she muttered.

“We should announce marriage. I wanna make children with you” Leonard sad kissing her lips.

Mr and Mrs Miller smiled at each other.

“Thanks friend” Dagon said to Mikaela. His hands were handcuffed since he had killed a lot of innocent people too.

“I’ll visit you time to time” Mikaela said hugging him briefly before the police dragged him away.

Read – Can’t help but fall in love episode 7 – 8

“That’s weird” Ben said behind.

“I know but, he’s good inside” Mikaela said while Ben frowned.

“Not for me” Ben muttered.

“So what are you doing next?” She asked.

“I have to go back to Jamaica. I need to check on my mom. I’ll be there for a while, I’ll reach you when I’m back, what about you?”

“Wilson asked me to join the CIA agent because of my talent” she squealed jumping.

“Cool. Congrats”

“You can join too”

“Nah I’m fine. I’m a nigga on the street and I love it that way”

“So when are you leaving?”

“After Mr Adam’s burial” he replied.

Brahms went to meet Raymond who chatting with Elsa.

“Hey” he greeted and they both look up. “I’m glad we did it. You’re a true leader Raymond”

“You did a great job too” Raymond said.

“I’d like us to have a drink together tonight” Brahms suggested.

“Sure brother”

“Brother, I like the sound of that” Brahms smiled and they both hug.

Zeke also appeared. “Hi, uhm I owe you an apology Raymond.. I’m sorry I disappeared like that”

“It’s alright” Raymond said wrapping his arm around Elsa.

Natasha watch the machine beeping as Jake laid unconscious.

‘He’s fine now, it’s just going to take few days before he wakes up’ She recalled the doctor’s word and smiled.

A middle age woman walked into the ward, her eyes was on Jake. Natasha stood up recognizing her.

“How is my son?” The woman asked.

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~GRAVE YARD~

Mrs Brown kept on staring at the brick stone having the name ‘MARK ADAMS’ written on it.

“I’m sure he’s at peace right now” she spoke when she felt Raymond’s hands on her shoulder.

“Yeah he is. Look, I wanna thank you for been the best mother, I’ve ever seen. You’re the real hero here. If you hadn’t been in my life then non of this would have happened. You never left because of my mistakes instead you guide me through the right path. We wouldn’t have been this Victorious if it wasn’t for you”

Mrs Brown’s heart swell listening to his words. Her eyes teared up.

“I love you so much momma” He said kissing her forehead.

They both went back to meet the others.

Brahms also greeted Mrs Brown as they all have no grudes against each other. Lisa was also buried and was paid respect too.

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Lucas laid on the floor, his hand folded in between his knee. He look leaner than before, his face paled and look weak.

The gate opened and some people stepped in. He shifted and look up at them. Raymond, Natasha and his dad.

“J..just k..ill me” he managed to utter.

“Trust me, I badly want to but…” Natasha left out a light breath. “I’m not like you” she said.

“R..Ray.. just k..kill me” he stuttered.

“Nah.. I want you to stay alive and watch us live. Death is a small punishment for you..”

“D..dad” He stuttered crying.

Mr Charles also started crying. “I’m sorry son. I won’t leave you alone this time. I’ll be there for you.. I promise”.

Just after his word some doctors came in. Those handling people with mental disorder.

“No..oo” Lucas shook his head as they handcuffed him.

*** Read – Palace in chaos episode 103 – 108

~THREE YEARS.. LATER~

Raymond rushed into the hospital breathing heavily. He heard his wife was in a labor room. Yes! His wife. They got married two years ago and she got pregnant after fulfilling her dream of becoming a famous singer with millions of fans.

The country was peaceful with Lucas still under strong surveillance with his Dad checking on him as promised.

“Where is she?!” He grabbed a nurse.

“W..ward.. 32..” the nurse stuttered recognizing him a famous painting artist owning the most famous art gallery in California.

Raymond rushed there and busted in without even wasting a moment.

There he saw his wife with a baby in her arm.

“A boy! Bruh it’s a boy!” Jake jumped to hug him. After a waking up, he married Natasha. Brahms was the one who paid for his mom surgery and was currently in New York with a fiance.

“Fuck!” Raymond covered his lips as tears rolled down his cheek. Elsa chuckled holding her son’s tiny hand.

Leonard hands were around Charlie’s waist as he carried his own daughter Sarah. Charlie is a manager in the Mizel entertainment industry while Leonard is the CEO of his dad’s company.

“I can’t believe this” He swept his hair backwards and went to kiss Elsa deeply on her lips.

“I love you so much Elsa”

“I love you too. He looks a lot like you especially the emerald eyes” She said grinning beautifully.

Mrs Brown also came in and screamed out her lungs.

“Imma fucking grandmother!!” She screamed around the hospital while others laughed.

“I see why she’s your mother” Piper said. She is now in college and still in a relationship with Mason.

“Hey look it’s Ben” Leonard said opening a video call with Ben.

“Oh my Gawd Ray!! How could you have given birth before me!!” Ben yelled.

“That’s your problem bro, not mine” Raymond shrugged looking back at the child.

“I’m coming back to California tomorrow to see little Raymond Adams!” Ben said.

Brahms, Zeke and Mikaela also said they are coming tomorrow

“Tell them not to come and choke my wife” Raymond sighed.

Mrs Brown came back breathing hard after screaming around the hospital.

“He’s… so.. cute!” She exclaimed breathing hard.

“Yes he is”

“He wants to be in his dad’s arm for a while” Elsa said.

“He might drop him” Jake said but Natasha hit his head.

Raymond slowly took the baby in his hand. Smiling, he felt like the happiest person in the world right now. He sat beside Elsa and looked at her.

“Let’s name him Alfred” Raymond muttered. “You like it?” He asked Elsa.

“I love it” she smiled.

“Thank you for making me whole Baby” he muttered drawing his face close to hers.

Their lips met as the both exchange the words.

I LOVE YOU.

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